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PostSubject: Final Burst   Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:51 pm

name: Final Burst
colors: Very dark green [Like Final Wave]
description: The user must focus all his Ki into his hands before letting out a burst of green wave. Its can destroy meteors. But the move is considered a final resort because of the skill you need to use it. If you use it, its likely that you will either have broken arms.


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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:05 am

well bobo such a powerful move should have draw backs such as weakinging your character servely, firza had to rest after each time he destroyed a planet because he was exausted afterwards. get a few heavy drawbacks after use and you'll be approved
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:27 am

The only way to use the move is to have one arm broken or damaged. That is why the move can only be used with one hand. If you have both hands, the move doesn't work.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:04 pm

so you have to have a broken arm to use this move? that makes no sense to me but ill wait for a second opionion
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:09 pm

sorry i think having the ability to blow up the earth at this level is verry unlikly so im going to have to say no on this move until you either have a verry harsh draw back such as character death or weaken it considerably

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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:59 pm

My ability Final Bang causes every bone in my arm to shatter if I put to much energy into the attack, but the attack is extremely powerful...But I wouldn't take it to the strength of destroying a planet, at least not so early on...And yeah that doesn't make sense, why would your arm have to be broken for it to work...
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:09 pm

okay now your arms would be broken after using the attack okay........

i might approve it on one condition

your character loses alot of ki, cannot use any ki attack for a long time, and has to get immediate rest afterwards (meaning sleepy time) and must take days to recharge his power.

put all that and we will increase your chances of approval
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:00 pm

Yeah okay.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Fri Aug 07, 2009 4:54 am

um you might want to edit that nto your bio ><
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:17 am

Okay, give me a few minutes. Is it approved then?
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PostSubject: Re: Final Burst   Fri Aug 07, 2009 12:05 pm

add all that i have jsut said to add in the last post and it will be aproved
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